Progress on my thesis statement

I became aware that my 'makes me happy' text is quite lighthearted really. Alot of what I like is pretty childish so I made the below as my thesis statement initially:

However on reflection I felt that it didn't have the positive feel I was hoping for and limited my future outcomes. I do not just like childish things and I wanted more scope for my manifesto. This led to my second attempt at a thesis statement:


The image in this second piece is made up of separate images of the letters, courtesy of Leo Reynolds. Credit: Leo Reynolds (www.flickr.com/lwr/)